Last night I did add a note to the file for Chapter 1 about adding a scenelet from Ceri's POV to split the long section in Wil's POV. I've also be cogitating on some very helpful notes David Levine posted to the IWriSloMo mailing list a few weeks ago. These were notes he'd taken at a novel writing workshop led by a couple of editors. Also cogitating on one of
Having decided that this Emotional Plot is a way of looking at novel structure, I now need to devise some way of charting it to aid the revision.
Here endeth the waffle for today. I'm sure everyone who has a grip on this writing thing already knew this. I mean I knew it (or my unconscious did), but it's just another thing I've noticed conscously and feel that I ought to get a better grip on if this novel's ever going to sell.