Helen (heleninwales) wrote,

  • Mood:

Writing progress

Words today: 548
Reason for stopping: Need to set up stuff for the evening class.
Other: When I wrote the 5,300 word sprint for the end, most of it was fine, but the last 300 words or so came out as very dull telling. I was summarising lots of stuff in order to tie up a few loose ends because I'd forgotten that there was supposed to be one more short scene required before the epilogue. Today I managed to make use of the Before the Evening Class slot and made a start on the missing bit.

Telling is fine when it's done well. The telling I deleted was not done well and it much much better as a properly dramatised scene.

  • We voted!

    I had a two hour Welsh class on MS Teams first thing this morning, but once it finished at 11.30 G and I walked into town to vote. Whether it was…

  • Ripe bananas

    18/52 for the group 2021 Weekly Alphabet Challenge This week's theme was: R is for Ripe I don't get bananas every week because my husband doesn't…

  • Round the edge of town

    Yesterday I went for a little wander around some of the narrow lanes on the edge of town. I needed to pick up the new edition of the Quaker address…

  • Post a new comment


    Anonymous comments are disabled in this journal

    default userpic

    Your reply will be screened

    Your IP address will be recorded