Pages revised today: 1
Pages revised total: 55
Percentage complete: 23
Reason for stopping: Need to get ready to go out to work.
There's been a lot of talk about description recently on rasfc. Hoewver, deciding exactly how much to put in this novel is rather difficult. I feel it needs a little more than it has at present, but I don't want to slow the pace or it will dilute the humour. I think the answer is to add a touch more on this pass (if I feel a scene is distinctly Description Lite) and then see what the first readers have to say.