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Reason for stopping: End of chapter and a room to paint.
This was the women's wild dance on the mountain chapter. Some untangling of sentences to do and a lot of agonising over "maypole". I don't know what their months are called, but one of them won't be May. But in the end I left it in because I couldn't think of an alternative. There will be another revision before I submit it anywhere, so I have time to think of an alternative.