Revealing Secrets was supposed to be funny. A light-hearted romp through the British Further
Education system, that's what I'd planned. But it's demanding Lyrical Passages also Dark and Genuinely Scary Bits. I think this might be why it's sulking and refusing to progress. There's a tussle of wills going on here. Eventually the story will win, but until I get the overall tone right, I can't do anything with the beginning.
Sigh...